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[Rainy world and memories DEMO v 1.1]

Okay, there's so many levels, I'll stop here. If this is what you call a demo, I can only wonder how expansive you want the final game to be! Let me give you some of my thoughts:

-I like the ambience and the soundtrack!
-I wish I knew what I'm actually trying to do in this game
-You *really* should add checkpoints, given how long the levels are, and there are sections that involve pure trial and error, I don't think i should be knocked all the way back to the start of the level for a death.
-Every level is aesthetically pretty much the same except the scenery slowly changes, which made me feel like I'm hardly making progress. I don't think there are enough unique landmarks to invoke curiosity.
-Also, I picked something up? And I think it did nothing?

In my opinion, it can be promising, though I'd say try to just refine and polish your game now because you probably already made enough levels lol

ProjectFuture responds:

thank you very much for your criticism, this is very important for my game :) But still, I would like to clarify a couple of points.Not understanding what is happening in the game is an important part of it. There is an explanation, but it is hidden, and yes, I understand this feature can scare away. And as for the secrets, so far they are regarded simply as collectibles, since this is only a demo version of the game, in the full version they will make sense. Thanks again for your feedback :3

[REVERIE (DEMO)]

that was some beautiful writing lmao

I'm up to see what will come out of this! Hopefully those default sprites will be slowly replaced for a start

awaffleswag responds:

thank you! they will be replaced yes. probably a little further in the future though as we're focusing on the game as a whole currently.